Tom Riddle Sonnets

[Mandragora]

Hmm... I came across this lyrics by Elliott Smith called "Waltz#2" and it made me think that Tom Riddle would be singing these words to his mother.

Made me think that maybe some of us can come up with self-made verses that would somehow look or speculate at Tom's different dimensions.

Here's the song that inspired me to think of possible Tom-verses or sonnets... something like making Tom a character of a Shakespearean tragedy I got this from www.sing365.com by the way.

Waltz#2 XO

first the mic then a half cigarette
singing cathy's clown
that's the man that she's married to now
that's the girl that he takes around town
she appears composed, so she is, i suppose
who can really tell?
she shows no emotion at all
stares into space like a dead china doll
i'm never gonna know you now, but i'm gonna love you anyhow
now she's done and they're calling someone
such a familiar name
i'm so glad that my memories remote
'cos i'm doing just fine hour to hour, note to note
here it is the revenge to the tune
"you're no good,
you're no good you're no good you're no good"
can't you tell that it's well understood
i'm never gonna know you now, but i'm gonna love you anyhow
i'm here today and expected to stay on and on and on
i'm tired
i'm tired
looking out on the substitute scene
still going strong
XO, mom
it's ok, it's alright, nothing's wrong
tell mr. man with impossible plans to just leave me alone
in the place where i make no mistakes
in the place where i have what it takes
i'm never gonna know you now, but i'm gonna love you anyhow
i'm never gonna know you now, but i'm gonna love you anyhow
i'm never gonna know you now, but i'm gonna love you anyhow

[Mandragora]

Just came up with this one, think might come up with more

SERPENTINE CONVERSATIONS
*Mandragora*

slithering words echoes against
this dark chamber of whispered codes
spoken in tongues none will know
only I in these shadows of the supposedly foe
my friend, my father
the giver of my fortune

with commands and yearnings
such power within reach
in exchange of life, their death
upon my death, the loss of lives
i hold the chord of one's fate in my hands
it is given, it has been with me
along with my rage
the lost conscience of my soul

and in this dark enclave
my intensity hits beyond these walls
serpentine tongue beyond lethal than the bite
and eyes that pierce as much as the fang
i own this moment of death
coiled at my feet
like a Biblical staff poised before its master
it is in my command
it understands

[Mandragora]

I don't know what to call this one...

it is with a whip of the wand
body is poised in mid-air
suspended in disbelief
deprived of oxygen
falls on the floor
dead and gone
air escapes
the last
time
like a
moan,
a myrtle
lost of greens
lacks the breeze
to sway with at night
and breathe in the rest of
the days to come seem bleak

she dissolves with the earth
no more than a memory
in a split second of a stare
the nights shall be filled
with her cries for answers

[Lord Voldemort]

Beautifull sonnets!!!!!

Have you got any more??

[lizifer]

they're cool

[Mandragora]

Hey thanks

I'll see, I really want to focus on Tom Riddle, he's a very interesting character. And Barty Crouch too, plus Sirius Black and Lupin.

You guys should share yours, I know you guys can make one

[MsPoet]

Mandragora said:

Hey thanks
You guys should share yours, I know you guys can make one

I'm working on one....I'm working on one.....

Donna

[Lord Voldemort]

I shall try, when I'm finished with one, I shall put it here, ok?

[ausaims]

Very good.